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Look at me spiraling down
no maybe that's not me spiraling
maybe that's me watching my sanity go down the drain
it's not even going down the drain
No I remember now
I watched it fly out my window just last night
I do believe I am going to miss it
Because once you have lost it
there is no getting it back again
It may not be so bad
Life is a lot better
when you don't have to consider
if ppl think your actions are crazy or not
Yes
I dont know why i didnt lose a long time ago
it may have saved a lot of trouble and heartache
If it had flown away years ago
I wouldnt be the poor dressed societal rodent I am today
Maybe this is all for the best
Maybe I wont have to worry anymore
Maybe I can stop caring what other pple thing of me
Or maybe no one will notice and nothing will change
Wouldnt that be a shame
To lose your mind and
have nobody care what happens to you
Thats life for you
NO that's my life
Thats me in that corner
Losing my Sanity and not caring
IF I ever get it back again
©2007-2009 ~cannibuscorpus
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Author's Comments

I started writing during my lunch break after having had a really bad morning and this is what came out. I dont know where it came from really I just like to write when I feel depressed.

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:iconflamesx666:
I really like this poem.

It's really good.

:hug: I relate to it.

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If I lay here.. if I just lay here, would you lie with me and just forget the world? Forget what we're told. Before we get too old. Just show me a garden that's bursting into life. Let's waste time chasing cars around our heads.
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ehsz... When my english be good enough, I'll write my poems in that language, but now I've to learn. heh... :(

but no matter... some day I'll write something :D

btw.

You know that this poem is realy good? ...and as the commentator above me, I relate to it... well, I can say that I love it. couse it's so real and so... truthfulness.

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In another world...
where sun is red
and clouds are made
of blood
:iconxijan:
It reminds me a bit the style Virginia Woolf used in her diaries... That's a complement in my eyes, cos I love her writing! Nice job!
:iconcannibuscorpus:
ooooh thankies!!!:)

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~Must we always be in waiting?~

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